“Yeah,I can see why you're called that” I said looking Slime-Green up and down again and again.
“And how do you know? asked Slime Green.
“...Umm...uuu...I just...umm...guessed?
“Oh,well you're very good at guessing”said Slime Green,not having any idea that I was actually winding him up.
“Well,I’d better get going now.See you again soon”
And the huge green monster just jumped out of the hot air balloon like it’s a thing that people [or monsters] do everyday.But even though he said we’d meet again we never did.
By Abi.
Hi Abi - each week I comment on different 100 word challenges, and this week your is one of mine! I really enjoyed reading this - you've used the prompt in a very imaginative way & have also used lots of terrific language and punctuation - well done! :-)
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Hi Abi!
ReplyDeleteI've popped in to read this great piece just so that you have someone else commenting on your work. I love the idea of slime Green. You have repeated a couple of sets of words - green monster which means you have taken up some of your 100 with repeats. not a problem but I would have loved more conversation between you both. It is though a very enjoyable piece of writing!
that is epic abi that whas well writen to smilly face its katlyn the cool kid
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